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Post by Gifted on Oct 30, 2006 9:04:45 GMT -5
I need some other thoughts for my new story, The Great Disney Scavenger Hunt. I've got the Prologue, but I need people to read it and tell me their thoughts.
I found this Prologue alot harder than usual. For one, I'm using some obcsure Disney characters. Some I haven't seen before so I guessing how they act. Dreaming On is alot easier becaues Amy doesn't know alot about Disney, but The GReat Disney Scavenger Hunt is abou the Disney Characters. I want to know if there are too much details, or too little, etc.
Any volunteers?
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Post by stargazer on Oct 31, 2006 2:57:29 GMT -5
You are lucky Jenna, one I usually don't other stuff like this two I am in a great hurry. It's really and dad is getting really, I have shaking him up, like a hot pot. I got him mad I am writing really fast. Thirdly, I don't know much about disney. O.k. I might be able to read it or perhaps you will let me get it to another disney fan. I think I know a couple. Oh yeah no matter I want get done with the chapter and I think my song is o.k. so never mind well when are update dreaming on (sing song voice) I am awaiting. O.K. I am bring it tomorrow just copyit and then giveeeeey me. O.k. I got to go I fear my father.
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Post by Gifted on Oct 31, 2006 9:56:08 GMT -5
I only understood that you volunteered and your Dad is mad at you. Otherwise, What?
I have no idea when Chapter 3 is coming out. I'm having trouble planning it out. I'll let you know when it's done.
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